Excerpt Monday: Valentine’s Day Special

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In honor of Valentine’s Day, Excerpt Monday Writers are featuring full length stories! My offering is a flash fiction piece originally published at Coffee Time Romance. Enjoy!

The Eyes of Have it

by Debbie Mumford

Amy Davidson forced herself to look away from Brett Rawlings’ beautiful, dark eyes.  Lord, have mercy, she thought as she bent to adjust his riding helmet.  It’s a good thing you’re only five.  I could lose myself in eyes like those.

“Will you be observing his session today, Mrs. O’Rourke?”  Amy worked as a therapist for a therapeutic riding center in New York’s Central Park.  She loved her job and on a beautiful spring day like this, her heart fairly sang!

The grey-haired governess shook her head.  “No, I’m just dropping him off on my way to the airport.”  She smiled, a dreamy expression softening her no-nonsense gaze, “I’m off to visit my newest granddaughter.  Born just two days ago in Baltimore.”

“How exciting!  Will you be gone long?”

“I’m taking a month off.  This is Lisa’s first child.  She and Ben begged me to come and stay.”  She glanced at her wristwatch.  “I’ve got to run.  I’m not sure whether Mr. Rawlings will pick Brett up, or the temporary nanny.  But whichever, you’ll know you can release him by their code word:  Hopsalot.”

“Hopsalot?”

Mrs. O’Rourke laughed.  “A remnant of Mr. Rawlings’ childhood.”  She stooped to kiss Brett’s cheek.  “Be good, young man.  I’ll see you in a month.”  With a cheery wave, she disappeared into her white minivan and drove away.

“Well, Brett, it looks like it’s just you and me today.”  Amy leaned down and unfastened the myriad straps that held Brett’s twisted body upright in his padded wheelchair.

The little boy smiled, his liquid brown eyes sparkling with anticipation.  Amy loved those eyes, a gift, she felt sure, from his deceased mother.  Brett’s medical records told a sad story; his delivery had been complicated, robbing him of his mother while leaving him with Cerebral Palsy.

Though she knew she shouldn’t have favorites, Brett held a special place in Amy’s heart.  She blessed the day she’d decided to blend her physical therapy degree with her Montana-ranch-girl love of horses.  However, her best decision (much to her parents’ chagrin) had been to leave the Big Sky country and move to New York City.  If she hadn’t, she’d never have met this precious child.  On the other hand, despite her love of the City’s vibrant pulse, she often despaired of finding a man who would share her country-bred values; family must always come first.

“Today’s the day, Brett,” she said, hoisting the little boy out of his chair and into her arms.  “Today we get to leave the arena and follow a bridle path into the park.”

Brett didn’t answer, Amy had never heard him speak, but his eyes glowed with excitement as she lifted him onto Molly’s saddle and adjusted the supporting harness.

Molly turned her head as far as the cross-ties allowed and neighed a greeting to her small rider.  The sorrel standardbred appeared too tall for the slight child, but Amy knew the mare’s placid disposition made her the perfect mount for Brett’s first foray into the open air.

Once Brett was securely seated, Amy moved to Molly’s head, released the cross-ties, and holding her bridle in one hand and lead in the other, led the mare from the stable.  Glorious sunshine assaulted her eyes and she glanced up to be sure Brett’s helmet provided adequate protection as his eyes adjusted.  His smile outshone the sun as he gazed happily around.  The special saddle provided adequate support for his spinal column, but didn’t prevent his head from jerking from side to side as he took in his new surroundings.

Satisfied as to his safety and comfort, Amy led the horse slowly across the street and down the block and a half to Central Park.  Her dark brown hair, tied up in a pony tail, swept her shoulders as she walked.  She wore comfortable hiking boots, jeans, a white twill shirt and a red windbreaker emblazoned with the Center’s logo.  When she reached the trailhead for the bridle path, she pulled Molly to a stop and stepped back to check on Brett.

“Are you okay?” she asked.

He grinned lopsidedly, and slowly blinked those gorgeous eyes once, and then stared at her with glittering anticipation.  A clear “yes.”

“All right, then.  Here we go!”  She clucked to Molly and they set off on the two mile beginner’s loop.

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After Brett’s ride, Amy held him with his back against her chest; her left arm supported his weight while tucked in the curve behind his knees, while her right arm held him firmly across his chest.  They approached Molly’s nose.  The big sorrel snuffled his honey-blond hair, released now from his riding helmet, and softly lipped his clenched fist.  His attempt to relax his grip telegraphed itself through Amy’s body; she held her breath, willing him to accomplish this feat.  Slowly his fingers opened revealing a slightly sweaty peppermint.

Molly accepted the tribute with gentle lips, and Brett breathed a contented sigh.

“Very nice, Brett,” Amy praised.  “Molly loves peppermints.  You’ve just made her day.”

Amy turned to find a tall, healthy, adult version of Brett watching them from behind mirrored sunglasses.

“Dah!”

Brett’s exclamation surprised Amy, but left no doubt as to the man’s identity.  A huge grin wreathed his features as he stepped forward and relieved Amy of her burden.

“Hey there, big boy!  Have you had a good time?”

The obvious love in his voice tugged at Amy’s heart.  She’d worried occasionally about her favorite client, having only met his governess.  No more.  Father and son had a tangible bond.

When he finished arranging Brett in his wheelchair, Mr. Rawlings straightened and turned to Amy with an outstretched hand.

“David Rawlings,” he said, shaking her hand in a firm, but pleasant grip.  “You must be Amy.  Mrs. O’Rourke raves about you, and I can tell Brett likes you, too.”

Amy stammered something unintelligible, but David Rawlings kept right on talking.

“If I’d known you had such a sweet smile, I’d have dropped by sooner.”  An infectious grin destroyed any condescension the words might have held.  He swept his sunglasses off and added, “Oh, and the password is ‘Hopsalot,’” in a conspiratorial whisper.

Amy found herself gazing into the most gorgeous pair of eyes she’d ever seen.  Brett’s father’s eyes were deep chocolate pools, heralds of an honest and forthright character.

“Lord, have mercy,” she murmured, as a flutter of possibility tingled down her spine.

~The end~

© Debbie Mumford, 2006
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4 Responses to Excerpt Monday: Valentine’s Day Special

  1. KB Alan says:

    Awww. *sniff, sniff*

  2. Ella Drake says:

    Such a wonderful story.
    *passes KB a tissue*

  3. *lol* Thanks KB and Ella. Glad you enjoyed it.

  4. Avery Kelvin says:

    I really liked your blog! Excellent read. keep up the good work.

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