Excerpt Monday: The Silver Casket

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This month I’m sharing from my latest release, The Silver Casket.

The Silver Casket
by Debbie Mumford

Cat Logan, a young American with a recent degree in medieval literature, travels to Scotland to discover her Celtic roots. She finds more than she bargained for when a mysterious silver casket (rumored to hold the desiccated heart of a long dead Scottish laird) transports her back in time to the 1400s and the man whose heart she holds in her hands.

Genre: Time Travel/Historical
Rating: Tangy
Book Length: Novella

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Excerpt:

Cool stone vibrated beneath her cheek, leaching the warmth from her unprotected face. By the time she identified the faint tremor as footfalls, a buzz of quiet voices had filtered through her dazed mind. People. Help. Whatever had happened, she needed help.

Gathering her strength, she stood and leaned heavily against the wall. Her eyes flew open as sense registered. The wall! It no longer ended at waist height; she leaned against a fully constructed wall in an enclosed corridor!

Her stomach roiled, and she fell to hands and knees, spewing vomit over the stone floor. Disoriented, shaking, and drenched in cold sweat, Cat huddled against the wall.

The owners of the voices arrived. Words swirled around her, bounced off the walls, and pounded her aching head. Men spoke rapidly in an archaic form of Scots-Gaelic that she recognized, but couldn’t follow. Sweat-stench mingled with the acid tang of her sick. She panted through her mouth to lessen the impact of the odor on her queasy stomach. Too tired to do more than lift her head, she glanced around the corridor. Flickering light revealed four broad, shadowy
figures.

God! Where was she? And how had she gotten here? Her shaking arms gave way, and she collapsed in an exhausted heap on the cold stone. Shock pushed her over the edge of the abyss, and she fell back into unconsciousness.

* * * *

Cat woke with a throbbing headache and jangled nerves from a terrifying dream: she’d been compressed, unable to breathe. She pushed the thought away and huddled deeper under the covers, pulling the scratchy sheet over her aching head and adjusting her hips to avoid an offending lump in the mattress. She frowned and opened her eyes a slit. Dim light filtered through a coarsely woven, yellowed sheet. Panic stricken, she threw the sheet aside and, ignoring the sharp pain in her skull, scrambled from the bed. Bare feet connected with cold stone, and memory returned in a rush.

Frigid morning air brushed her skin, and she shivered. She stood in the middle of a stone chamber naked as the day of her birth. Yanking the sheet from the bed, she wrapped herself in its rough, but warm, folds and surveyed the room.

Stone walls and floor, rough-hewn beams supported what could only be a thatch roof. Narrow arrow loops served as windows spilling both sunlight and frosty air into a chamber furnished with a low, wooden bed, a chamber pot, and a rickety table with ewer and basin. A single, crudely fashioned chair stood beside the table.

The door creaked open, and she flattened herself against the wall, hugging the sheet tightly to her breast. The most dangerous man she’d ever seen stood poised on the threshold. Tall, muscular, with long, dark auburn hair, he looked like a warrior prince from a Scottish fairy tale.

Heat suffused her face—and every other part of her body—as his gaze raked her from tousled hair to bare feet. Oh, God! To meet a man like this…wrapped in a sheet!

The Silver Casket by Debbie Mumford
Genre:
Time Travel/Historical
Rating: Tangy
Book Length: Novella
Available Here!


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9/11: Never Forget

     Copyright © 2001 The Record (Bergen County, N.J.) - Photo by T. E. Franklin

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Rewriting: Necessary or Not?

Dean Wesley Smith has started a series of posts on “Killing the Sacred Cows of Publishing.” This week he’s tackling what he considers the myth that “You MUST rewrite to make something good.”

Go read it and tell me what you think.

For myself,  when I compare the reality of my process to Dean’s description of his, they’re not that different. He and I both clean up the manuscript for our 1st readers (though I definitely do more than run mine through spell-check), evaluate their thoughts, make a few changes, and send it out the door.

I think I’ll adopt Robert Heinlein’s business rules:

1) You must write.
2) You must finish what you write.
3) You must not rewrite unless to editorial demand.
4) You must mail your work to someone who can buy it.
5) You must keep the work in the mail until someone buys it.

Interesting stuff. I’ll be following this series.

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Tuesday Cuteness – Kittens!

Who doesn’t love fluffy white kittens?

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A Different Way to Storyboard…

I’ve heard numerous recommendations for white boards, bulletin boards, note cards and sticky notes for plotting a novel. Systems where you can list your chapters and scenes and then move them around at will. They always sound fabulous until I get home and try to implement them.

That’s when I run up against two fatal flaws:

  1. space constraints – I don’t have any place to mount the size board I’d need to deal with a novel in linear fashion (and I’m a very linear person)
  2. these are pen and ink functions…and I detest writing by hand.

Sigh.

Recently, I found an answer to my dilemma. Virtual Post-it Notes. Seriously. I think I’m in love! I’ve outlined my WIP, transferred the chapter titles and scene summaries onto color-coded virtual stickies that I arranged on a cyber-bulletin board. Now I can rearrange things as I write. And when I’m ready to do my second draft, I’ll be able to move scenes around on the cyber-board and then restructure the corresponding text when I’m all done. Too cool!!

Warning: If you try this program, be aware–it’s very annoying at first. Post-its pop-up everywhere and are in the way. Sheesh! I thought I’d have to delete the program before I got started, but I stuck to it (haha…no pun intended) and tamed the little monsters. Once domesticated, they’re AWESOME!! (Oh, and there’s a 30-day free trial, so you can play with it before you purchase.)

Okay. I’m now returning to my previously scheduled writing.

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